Friday, June 24, 2011

Can you tell me your opinions on this song/poem I wrote?

So I'm writing a song but I only have little parts of it done. Here's
one of the parts.

"How can I fine the perfect words to describe this feel, this feeling
I feel. A feeling no one else feels. It won't seem to go away. Always
with me, distorying every light it sees in me.

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